When will there be more? I want to know what happened to Elora and who the figure is! (read both endings)
The Chameleon Creator
A downloadable Visual Novel for Windows, macOS, and Linux
THE CHAMELEON CREATOR is a visual novel about the nature of stories, and the different ways they can affect our world. The novel follows the adventures of young Elora Lamplight, but there might be focus on characters down the road...
The visual novel is intended to be about six chapters long, of varying lengths. The first chapter is available right now, with the other chapters coming later on in the year... maybe. All chapters plan to be free, so the only thing you're gonna be giving up is your time (and potentially faith in humanity), so hopefully I don't waste it???
- Story and writing was done by me?
- Character art was done by Osteo! Check her out she's awesome!!
- Additional character art was done by starglow! Check her out she's equally awesome!!
- Royalty Free stock music by: Kevin MacLeod, Daniel Nering, Kai Engel, and audioblocks.
- Royal Free stock backgrounds.
This is my first attempt at creating anything, so comments and opinions are much appreciated! Positive or negative, I'll love you all the same!!
The Chameleon Creator - Prologue (30~ Minutes)
Princess Elora Lamplight wakes up to another wonderful day in her Kingdom of Solstoria. However, today is not just any ordinary day; it happens to be her 14th birthday, despite her family's attempts to hide the fact. Read the story of the curious Princess who tries to discover what surprises are waiting for her on her special day...
*** There are two "endings", as well as some minor spooks and loud noises.
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Pretty nice! Liked it a lot!
# Feedback #
## Backgrounds ##
Fitting, but editing them to fit in with whatever the story currently tells us would really help.
## Drawings ##
Just need color, otherwise well done!
## Animations ##
"Eating with Elora" :-D
## Story ##
Pretty well, done! A pleasure to read. Very entertaining!
### Endings ###
"red" ending: Felt somewhat uninspired: *bla* *bla* *bla* **Your end!**
"toe" ending: HILARIOUS, laughed the whole time! :-) Very well done! :-P
Wow I wasn't expecting feedback, but I really appreciate it so thank you much!!
I get what you mean about the backgrounds. I'll have more flexibility when it comes to changing backgrounds as the story progresses... at least that's what I'm hoping.
The character portraits are actually going to stay black and white for a majority of the VN. I know it sounds like a lazy excuse me on my end, but there's a story reason why they are uncolored, and there will be a point in the story where they will have color lol.
I can see why you think the bad end is uninspired, but hopefully you can see it in a new light once more of the story comes out, as the rest of the story heavily draws from the bad end.
I'm also amazed so many people who've read this like the toe ending this was a mistake.